a journal of NMSU's English 535 class's collaborative poem
Thursday, October 28, 2010
Voila
Much Love,
Robert.
Billy the Kid
Jeanine
Since our group is working with photography right now in various forms, I took some pictures around town on Saturday, namely landscapes and some great shots of the sunset. I decided to work with one gnarly picture capturing whirling clouds above the city as the sun went down. Being a transplant to the area from other urban realms, I've already learned a lot about Las Cruces and have a lot of ideas as to what to capture next and write about. Here's another cool shot from that evening.
Team 3: first week
What remains (my response to photos of Mesilla)
What remains
Walk along these cobbles
drag yourself from
point to point in this well lit fort
know you are a transient
here for the now
and your now is simply
perception’s point -
look close
search for the air
breathed by
Pat Garrett
or Billy the Kid
or the Apache
whose land
is whose land
is whom
what remains
these stones
these brush strokes
to be filled in by tourist
or
I went to the plaza to see
but no one remembers -
the signs tell me things
but they are out of time
Things that reflect light
are left over
scattered
I do not know what these spaces are made of
What materials go into a place
this place
What refuse was buried here
before our truth is scratched
What can be seen clearly in the shot
is what was never there
it is our time,
haunted by your idea of image
conflated with
my need
to ascribe
meaning.
floydd michael elliott
Wednesday, October 27, 2010
Week One: Pockets of LC first glance
Alameda Depot ca. 1910 |
Alameda Depot ca. 2010 |
The last passenger trains from the depot were in 1968 but its restoration is a reminder of what was and is possible. This Depot was the hub of expansion in the past, a vitalizer in many ways. Going forward I can't help but imagine, as maybe they did a hundred years ago the possibilities.
These pockets around town that we spotlight are, for me, all in some way related to high hopes, failed hopes, places we might escape from or escape to. Maybe the pockets simply raise questions of nostalgia versus modernity that could be pondered in Pioneer Park (that resides just a few blocks away from the depot) on a beautiful fall day. All have importance both communal and/or personal for varied reasons. For me this exploration merely shines the light on and maybe gives a little insight to these places. Less am I trying to nail any one place down but more to just say, "here are some thoughts... make of it what you will." That leaves its ultimate designation, its importance or lack there of up to the the individual who stumbles upon or hides in his or her Las Cruces pocket.
Tuesday, October 26, 2010
Documenting through the Senses: Our First Exercise
If you haven't been to Dripping Springs, the trip is worth it--even if you have to pay the fee. Still, when the white truck pulled in (I'm assuming to come after me for not paying, though I might just be super paranoid), I pulled out speedily, if reluctantly.
This afternoon we traded sound for visual, and we are off to write based on only one sense. I'll let you know how the writing part turns out soon!
Monday, October 25, 2010
Adam's Experience
-Adam
Thursday, October 21, 2010
First Day
Today in class we looked at a variety of approaches at writing about a place. I wanted people involved to think about a few things: material culture, Prevallet's idea of investigative poetics, how our home, Las Cruces and the border on which we live, is a contested space. An apt metaphor for this region might be the large equestrian statue at the El Paso airport, a 44 ft tall sculpture of Juan de Onate, a conquistador famous for abuse of native populations. The statue these days is called "The Equestrian" since, as the project dragged on, more and more information about Juan de Onate complicated the desire to celebrate him. Unveiled in 2006, it is a source of controversy.